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jazzy_dave ([personal profile] jazzy_dave) wrote2016-08-16 11:12 pm
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Fazed - A Poem

I Must be fazed
A time shift in my perspective,
Thoughts congeal
Memory now selective.
I know things are hazier
An attack of aphasia
Breached in the emotive
Of cell degeneration
Sealed in the votive
Foreshadowing of days.

Jazzy D

[identity profile] nerthus.livejournal.com 2016-08-16 10:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent! Such a unique and illuminating insight into that state of being/perception!

[identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com 2016-08-16 10:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow...this is EXCELLENT, lovie!

*HUGS*

[identity profile] thespian15.livejournal.com 2016-08-17 04:55 am (UTC)(link)
That sounds like some of our patients. :p
Memory now selective.
I know things are hazier
An attack of aphasia

Sounds like a TBI, traumatic brain injury, patient. :o
Hugs, Jon

votive

[identity profile] pigshitpoet.livejournal.com 2016-08-17 06:00 am (UTC)(link)
so, you're going to live for a long time...

Re: votive

[identity profile] davesmusictank.livejournal.com 2016-08-17 08:41 pm (UTC)(link)
One hopes lol!

[identity profile] goodliver.livejournal.com 2016-08-19 06:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I like this very much.

[identity profile] dancingdragon3.livejournal.com 2016-08-20 01:41 am (UTC)(link)
Awesome work! I love your use of scientific language.