To The Gods - A Poem

[jazzy_dave]

Perhaps not my best poem but one that I needed to get off my chest.





Last night Thor struck his thunder
Rain pelted down asunder
Crackling whip of sound
Flooded reflective ground -
Flickering of the electric grid
but today it is stil humid.



Clouds announce a foreboding
The disdain and anger of Odin,
And Loki reveling inh is mischief
Knows whom to send the grief,
Hurl it at that cousin of mine
I will celebrate with wine.

Comments

[dancingdragon3.livejournal.com]

Oh, I like this a lot :-)

Cheers!

[maxauburn.livejournal.com]

Cool poem!

[hardblue.livejournal.com]

Inspired. It might be interesting to see what you can do with a poem when you give it some time, letting ideas incubate a bit and coming back to it again and again for redrafting, for polishing, instead of doing poetry and rhyme on the fly. On the other hand, I suppose you know what you want at this stage, and just want to have a little fun with it.

[davesmusictank.livejournal.com]

Usually i do let them stew a bit but thi one was just a fun one for the heck of it.

[a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com]

Well done, bb!!

*HUGS*

[londonkds.livejournal.com]

If you want to be properly Norse you should carve it into a pole and put a horse's skull on top.

[robby.livejournal.com]

An ode to the hairy thunderer!

[thespian15.livejournal.com]

I really like it. :)
Hugs, Jon

[kabuldur.livejournal.com]

I think the foreboding was to d with the Brexit!